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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

This is a well-written setup with promise. The imagery is vivid, and the atmosphere is engaging—I’m curious to see where the story goes!

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Tai An Zhou's avatar

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I only have three chapters of this though, it's a repurposed story I wrote on a whim.

But if people like it, who knows? :)

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